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| Going home Good action with the child pointing, good use of space across the image but needs something more on the RHS? |
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| Style Woman detracts, boys need to be facing the camera, but this might work. |
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| Cold Idea needs some work - the image is too static and background is wrong. |
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| Kiss Bin and black bag! Couple need eye contact. |
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| Beard Good angles, possibly too much sky or too much light? |
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| Success Step in time, happy couple |
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| Hat Good angle and expression, maybe further back to include feet? |
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| Finally Background is loud, but close crop is death... |
These images were taken with a 28mm lens, next shoot will be with a 50mm lens - I'm not sure which I prefer yet. Overall nothing to write home about, but good to be out with the camera and trying to piece things together for the assignment. Having said that, I've identified 3 locations for shooting when the market is on.
Next steps:
- Work on image style and feel
- Options for formats and layout
- More time shooting people
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